Did you know that most movie scripts are pitched within a 15 second time frame? Sometimes in 15 words or less? Ruthless editing for words … your words, I know that are awesome, yet you may be bubbling over with too, too many words. And you lose your audience. Too, too soon.
Think short, to the point, a little pithy, to catch the attention. Think like a one-line description that TV Guide might use to describe a show or movie of the week. You want your buyer to think/say “say what …” “tell me more…” Than your dialogue can open up when he or she starts probing.
Pitches that connect have several elements: they use 1 -Alliteration, 2 rhymes, 3-create a visual for the listener, 4-have something that is familiar or a familiar ring to it; 5-snappy and succinct; 6-a sense of fun or aha.Take the Harry Potter series. Loved by millions around the world.

Or … Harry Potter is a fantasy series about a young wizard and his two friends as they fight the forces of Evil and the corrupt Lord Voldemort while students at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.
Which asks, “Tell me more”? Which gets your attention?
Snappy, Sassy, Sometimes Salty…Your Book Pitch Must Be!
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